lyrical_sunshine

Cychwyn ar daith We left Londlow early the next day. It was warm, with a tiny wind that whipped up strands of the carthorse’s mane and blew dust in our ...

*peers cautiously around the forum* Am I the only one who really enjoyed this? I loved it, and it made sense to me. Does this mean I'm insane, like Imp? ...

This reminds me of something that should be in "Chicken Soup for the Kid's Soul" lol. It was well written and sweet. I can't give you a lot of advice ...

This is my favorite chapter so far :D but pegasi beat me to the in-depth critique. Overall, your writing improved hugely in just the past three chapters, and so did ...

"No." I tell that to Mom right away. (for some reason this sentence feels a little awkward. That's just a suggestion, though.) I don't want HER to come here and ...

OOOH! I finished it, and it is SO much better than Twilight! Stella, yes, the characters are definitely more well-rounded, more flawed. There is no Edward - there is only ...

The late birds call the breathless moon, and through the trees watch embers fly The wild wind sings its restless tune, and glowing, fervent hearts and eyes paint the sky ...

*glares* Why are you so amazing??? You make everyone else feel bad. Shame, shame on you Kylan. But seriously, this is excellent. The one thing I saw was, I think, ...

Even when neglected, it manages to flourish within itself. It could survive without air, rhythm, soul or thought, because it’s in every movement we make, affirming itself again. Breathing. It ...

I really like this! I thought it was going to be kind of cutesy at first, but it's actually very touching! I'd do an in-depth critique, but I don't have ...

I just bought this today, and I'm about 150 pages into it...she has this amazing talent for writing creepy stuff that she makes not-creepy lol. I'm excited about it, cuz ...

i really like this, but I second eeryone else and I'd love to know what's going on, lol. So either post another chapter that's going to explain this or add ...

Lol, I have a complex love-hate relationship with the books too. Bella irritates me, Edward is...okay...and Jacob rocks. Honestly I'm looking forward to the movie more than the next book, ...

I actually really like this! There are just a few things that I'd like to see you change. First: Please don't tell us exactly what's going on. Maybe it's just ...

*waves* Hello, my name is Sunny and I will be your editor for this evening! :D A/N Yeah.... Just thought I'd go around posting stories in different places. Critiques are ...