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Just the prologue to my almost-finished novel. May seem a bit...rough ^^'. Any comments or sugguestions are welcome and will be of use! And could you see this as an ...

Here's the thing: I have finished my novel (FINALLY), and right now I am editting, but there's this one part that is extremely corny/cheesy...maybe not so much the writting, but ...

Thank you everybody for all of your help. I really appreciate the good feedback. But since I'm planning to send this one off, I've got to get it off the ...

thanks for the help, everyone, but it's time for this one to be removed

I edited this a very little bit....basically all that means is that i fixed the mistakes that everyone pointed out to me. Thanks XD Also, I added everything else i ...

I've posted the old version of this somewhere on the sight, but the reviews were mixed. Now I've updated. What do you guys think? Sorry, you've missed it DX Answers ...