luna_the_shiekah

I rather enjoyed it. And now you’re making your third mistake. You’re thinking that if the darkness has a name, it must have a face. The most powerful forces are ...

Sirens wailed like banshees in the distance, heralding another death, another soul departed; the Maiyern priests would have one believe that death had absolved another soul of its infinite sins, ...

Since you said it "was" an essay I'll assume you've already handed it in for a grade. But because I've been spoken to by two holocause victims I'll crit. ^_^ ...

I figure I won't bother with a critique since everyone else has beaten me to it and I fear I will only enforce what everyone else has already said. But ...

I'm far too lazy to critique this simply because I find it extraordinary! So instead, I'll just comment on what I liked. The dialogue was believable and as Cassandra said, ...

Well, before I start my critique, I'd like to say that I was a bit apprehensive of the story at first, but upon finishing this first chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed ...

I have yet to actually read her vampire work. Despite the fact I've been on a vampire binge the past month book wise. Maybe I'm inadvertantly rebelling? Just kidding, it's ...

A red balloon came drifting by, floating free through the saphire sky. The chickadees chirp, The turtledoves croon, "Where are you off to, red balloon?" I love that verse, simply ...

" I dub thee Peter." Is by far my favorite line. I enjoyed it. And if it wasn't for the fact that I have to leave very shortly, I'd give ...

Very nice. Though at first I thought she might be wearing the snake and only the snake, that worried me. It is a bit funny to see then entire class ...