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Wow it took me a while to get back to this didn't it? (: Anyway, here is the second part of the review... =D Philip stood, as if I was ...

Well hiya, Ash! :D What better way for me to return home than to have two of your chapters lined up ready to read? And we start off with such ...

Okay then! here's the second part of my review: “I can’t tell you right now, but I will. But first you have to—“ Just then, another voice rang clearly through ...

Thank you so much all of you for your amazing reviews!! Now, I know this ended a bit abruptly, so I'm working on a more suitable (and non-abrupt :wink: ) ...

I am back *really excited*!! And ready to read the next three stories :D. I hope this will help you out... (: Penny and Joe “Do you want some McDonalds ...

Hiya, I'm back!! (: He left shortly after, to meet[s]ing [/s]his girlfriend for lunch. He offered for me to come, but being third wheel was never my scene. Instead I ...

Hiya there *waves* :D I'm back, and ready to do some more reviewing!! So let's get down to business!! Before we do though, this is just a little pointer for ...

That is definitely an improvement, but try and lengthen it even further!! Build off from it... you could print it off, then write comments, and questions all around it, as ...

I'm glad I could help you out =D --Lucyy xx

Rhiannon, thank you so much for taking your time to read and review it, and don't worry!! It's always nice to hear people like your work, hehe =P . Thanks ...

Thank you so much, MySunshine for reading and reviewing this; I appreciate it soooo much!! :D Also, thank you for your tips, they will come in extra useful, so thank ...

Thank you so much *beams at your comment* - you're too kind =D. Thank you also for taking your time to read and review this, I can't tell you how ...

Thank you so much for taking your time to read this Writersblock, I appreciate it very much!! :D And I'm so glad you liked it!! =D --Lucyy xx

Thank you both so much for your reviews. It really means a lot to me that you took your time to read and review this, so thank you (: stelagineva ...

Thank you both for your opinions, and for reading this: I appreciate it very much :D --Lucyy xx