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Heyy there, here I am for the promised review ... (: My dreams were only the sharp daggers of pain and the erratic breathing [s]coming[/s] passing through my lungs Great ...

Wow, I really liked this, the use of facts and the actual letter merged together was really cool - they flowed together really well *gold star* I have to ask ...

I'm going to start off with saying that I chose that you keep the POV's seperate, as it makes your story unique and more interesting ... you get to hear ...

Oh *huffs and looks miffed* why did you have to end it like that?? Another awesome chapter ash, but the only thing I hated was how it ended - you're ...

I have read this daytripper - it's another great chapter, but I only skimmed as I'm on a bit of a flying visit, but I promise on Saturday I'll be ...

Another great chapter ash *round of applause for the awesome writer* :wink: However, I picked up on a few things that I think you could do to improve ... Length ...

Another amazing chapter ashley - good job! The only thing that I thought you didn't explain, and remained a question throughout this whole chapter for me was how Sophia got ...

Heyy, here I am for the promised review - sorry I took so long!! But anyways, here we go ... (: It was six in the morning and I was ...

Thank you for PMing me to tell me this was up. Again, I was very happy to see your message sitting in the inbox with title 'New post' d: hehe ...

I managed to read this today - my homework is now not playing havoc on my conscience, so I can read this, yayy *dances* Anyway,.. I enjoyed this and William's ...

I spied you had posted a new piece, which I just had to check it out *wink* but don't you go neglecting Poisoned Roses though ... d: Anyways, onto a ...

Wow this was really good, I'm seriously addicted to this ashley, you are such a great writer!! I can't wait for more & thank you for PMing me by the ...

This is a seriously great story you got going on here!! It's so addictive, I can't think of any ways in which to improve it at all & your characters ...

Ooh, this story is getting better & better & more addictive .. I'm really enjoying this story!! I love the way you're always letting us know what Sophia's thinking & ...

Wow, I love how you ended this, it got me so wanting more :shock: I really enjoyed this & I can't wait for the next chapter!! Can you PM me ...