lucyy

Wow, another great chapter - there really is no other word I can think of using - you'vce rendered me speachless (: I loved how you described the neighbour's house ...

Wow, again, this is just ... wow... awesome work!! I love how you've layed this out, so very original, well done you :wink: haha. I love it!! Off to read ...

Wow, amazing preface, that left me totally breathless. Your writing's improved so much since I last read it (too long ago, sorry, bad lucyy ;p). Great job!! :D --Lucyy xx

Again - I really am lazy & eager, aren't I - I haven't looked at the above reviews, so sorry in advance if anything is repeated ... This is it, ...

Can't wait to read the next installment ... :D & I apologise in advance if I've repeated anything already said - I haven't looked at the other reviews, I was ...

Heyy Jazz!! I don't know if you remember me, but you reviewed one of my stories and I've been wanting to read this story for ages. So, it's half term, ...

Welcome well and truly to the Romantic Fiction Forum (where I spend most of my time haha :wink: ). Here I am for the promised review and I really hope ...

Heyy there - here I am for the review. I can't wait to get started!! Although, I haven't read the above reviews (I know, lazy ;p ) so I apologise ...

Here I am for the promised review, but I haven't looked at the review above me, so I apologise in advance if I repeat anything. So, I guess that's it ...

Heyy there Teddy :D Welcome to YWS!! And as this is your first story, I have decided to read and review it (: Before we get going, I'll talk you ...

4th February, 2008 Dear diary, Emily set me up with a blind date today and guess what??? He was the cutest thing you would ever see. He was charming, sweet, ...

Here I am for the promised review. Firstly I'll talk you through my critiquing techniques. I will firstly go through the work and point out any grammar, wording etc mistakes ...

Thanks for PMing me and here I am for the promised review. However, I warn you now that this will be a long and detailed review as I'm trying to ...

Heyy there, my name's lucyy & your story caught my eye, so I read it & now wish to review it (: Hope this helps ... Amazing first paragraph your ...

Another great chapter ash, but I did spot a few typos .. sent shock ways shock waves Sighting , I laid the Sighing She was the oldest and I know ...