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Hmm, what's going on here? MORE CHAPTERS?! Child, you didn't tell me! Happy review day, I am at your service. Nitpicks The only sort of physical activity he seem to ...

Hey powers! I'm going to review this thingy ma story as a special for review day! Nitpicks I had just come pack Don't you mean he just came back but ...

You forgot to tell me this was out. Baaaaad Raven, bad. :D Any who, happy review day! Nitpicks front of rease You forgot to capitalise Rease. It was a perfect ...

Hey Blackwood! Your works have been in the Green Room for a bit. I suspect finals. Let's kick this dinosaur out. Nitpicks Hutcheons eyes Hutcheon apostrophe s It’s frame and ...

Hi Blackwood! Here to review x Nitpick call 111! 111? Not 911? dying It’s You forgot the period. Its just Apostrophe between It and s boys wound Missing another apostrophe. ...

Hi Wood! Or Woody. Or Black. Here to review! Nitpicks were commanded I'm guessing you are missing the apostrophe in we're commanded looked out best Looked our best seniors had ...

Hi pup. This caught my eye. (You really should mark this as fan fiction. Otherwise this may be taken for copyright.) Nitpicks for at least 300 years three hundred years ...

Hello powers! You get this special review. This is the review that shall get me my fifth star! Thank you! Nitpicks I was 10 years The number! Run! It shall ...

I hate trying to review these. They are always personal opinions that you can offend someone by protesting... I guess it's a good thing I agree! Popular girls are very ...

Hello! Finally convinced myself to review, so here I am! Nitpicks [spoiler] this was good, She’d need to confidence. 1. I think that ze comma in question iz to be ...

I feel as though this piece has been review-neglected. I better review it so its feelings don't get hurt. Nitpicks He had left Poppy stood I would use the word ...

Mess! How are you doing? I can't seem to get you to review this fine review day. I'll just review for ya. So close to my fifth star! Nitpicks She ...

Ello. Here to review! Happy review day, by the way. Let's see if YWS can get that review goal. Nitpicks Why did he never tell this. Is this a statement ...

Where are all ze reviews? Ah, chérie, I am here to help. Nitpicks theatre, the red the newspaper Don't you mean they read the newspaper? as she walked, from the ...

A Skyrim fan fiction. This is actually the first time I saw one. I use to play Skyrim, but YWS stole my heart (quite literally too. I paid 20 dollars ...