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Hi Anna! Happy review day! You are also bait of my competition with a friend! Nitpicks uncontrollable-bowel-desiese I think you mean uncontrollable-bowel-disease And your not exactly In this case, you

Well, welcome to YWS! Let me first say: OH GOD, THAT IS A GIANT PARAGRAPH. Next let me say, happy review day! Now it's time for me to review this! ...

Ok. So an article- I suppose you want it edited before it's due? Alright then, let's see what I can do. Nitpicks As Secretary of Homeland Secretary of Homeland Security ...

GAH, RAVEN. YOU SHOULD REALLY SPAM ME AFTER WRITING NEW CHAPTERS. Nitpicks sat at the table listening to the conversation A comma between "table" and "listening" is missing! Quick, put ...

NEXT CHAPTER: Hi raven! Dudity duhidy, duh, blah blah blah, LET'S REVIEW! Nitpicks: Her hands gripped the blankets, as some sort of teddy bear. You don't really need the comma ...

Oh, hai Raven! Told you I would give you my first review! Well, happy review day (and may the odds be in your favour) Nitpicks In dreams was the only ...

*le sigh* Look, you are my first review in a while. (Yes, I gave that honor to you, and I shall beat you this review day.) Hmm, I guess it's ...

'Ello! Here to review! I see you aren't doing the past-present thing anymore. Nitpicks to be he first You probably meant the first. for his position in a century Isn't ...

Everyone has been doing brilliantly recently! No bloody nitpicks anywhere! I wonder how many pages this is. Hmmm. Christian has no books? Oh no, how every shall he survive the ...

This is bugging me! There is still no nitpicks! Of course Jake feels as though he is being watched! He said so in the previous chapter that he felt something ...

No nitpicks again! You are wearing me out here! So Jake is suppose to be in a coma. I guess that means he is stuck within his own mind? I ...

No nitpicks! What do we do about that, hmm? You are going to have to tell me! Some friend Francis is. Knocking Ruth out of her grief with his foul ...

Hey there! Here to review this very silly short story. Nitpicks leaping into the undebrush This girl has an over active imagination. Who knows how old she is? All we ...

Hey there! Here to review this piece. Nitpicks and wines to himself This probably should be whines mans name. man's name It suck to me It probably stuck to him. ...

How do you review these! *throws arms up in air* I'd hate to see his dark side. After all, he is charged for robbery, theft, graffiti, and kidnapping. Murder would ...