lostthought

I'm lost, well not literally lost but my name is lostthought. Ok, on to review. Nitypickys Ok, so I only saw a few things wrong here, and it is 1 ...

Ok, here to review! I don't really have any nitpicks. Stella already took most of what I was going to use. The fewer the nitpicks, the better the writer. All ...

Wow, this piece is really old and really needs another review. I wonder how it didn't show up. Ok, this piece is surprisingly short. I did see some missed spaces. ...

Well, since this is realistic, it must be real. Ok, that must sound like I don't believe or stuff like that. Actually, I'm just having a hard time imagining what ...

That was very different and unique. Well, I only had one nitpick Rising from the pile of ash, he looked upon the mountain and said, "the creature that lives inside ...

Ok, this could use some work in my opinion. Let's see.... 1) In poetry, usually it is a couple of words per line. I am yet to see poetry will ...

I can't nitpick this.... Too good for nitpicks... Ok, this is hard to nitpick. Well, I could say something about the punctuation but someone below me already picked at it. ...

Well, I am here to review. I think that some people missed some spots. Let me see... Well, my name[bold]'[/bold]s not Alice In [bold]the[/bold] future[bold],[/bold] Alice Well, all the bolded ...

..... Hi, I am here to review, your, ah, piece. Of you have done this in real life, I will avoid you wherever you go. Well, I only have two ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! Ok I like the idea so far. A teenage girl in London with no memory of how she got there but a knowledge of things ...

Wow, it is pretty brave to put your views on here. I agree that abortion is murder but I have to say I agree with some people down here saying ...

Hi Lu! Here to review your story. It's been in the green room for quite some time now. Let's kick it out shall we? As for nitpicking your story, that ...

H there! Here to review! Okay, I have no nitpicks that haven't already came to be said by Dreamy. (Oh, also somebody mentioned that Bol means pain in their language.) ...

Hi there! I am here to review. I was in the neighborhood and I caught up on Flitchling. I have no nitpicks (besides, Deanie stole that glory) and now I ...

Hi there! Here to review. Well I didn't get here in time. Silverlock already beat me to the punch on those nitpicks. So really, this is very well written. Of ...