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Hi pastel! You were not harsh at all! I'm very sorry I made you cry! Your review was also very sad, and I can relate to the feeling of losing ...

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I made it pretty confusing. I'll try and fix those parts! I definitely agree! One thing though, I also lost someone close to me. I ...

Thanks so much! I think I have a better idea now! And by the way, I loved your poem!

Hey! Thanks for the review. I'll fix that typo. and about the timing of the war? Uh... I have no idea.

Thanks for catching that!!! wow, I think im blind.

Thanks so much for the review! I still think Griffinkeeper has a point, but you've got another one too. I'll see what other people have to say before I make ...

AH! Punctuation! Sorry!!! I wrote this at 12 so I guess I forgot!!! Thanks for the reminder! and I'll see if I can fit better words without messing it up!

I kinda guessed at how a soldier might feel. It would be how I would feel, so I'd be a pretty weak soldier! Thanks for the review and I'll see ...

Thank you so much for the feedback! I was wondering about the one with thunder in it, if I should change it or not, but I guess I should keep ...

Sorry about the messy formatting. I tried several times to even out the spaces, but it wouldn't allow me to when I saved. Sorry! Still, I think the rhyme has ...

Thanks for the review! Yeah, this was for an English project and I had to fill three pages with some random story about survival. I'll put my all into my ...

Alright, so...I got the Italics to stay. And I hope it's more enjoyable now! Thanks again!

When I posted this, the Italics disappeared and I couldn't get them to show up. Sorry about that. I guess I have a lot to improve. Thank you for the ...

Wow! That language is powerful. So, you're saying, try to make the reader really KNOW that I seriously hate her?

I got some really useful feedback from your review! Thank you so much again!