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Re: Fallen Angel
WOW. This poem left me almost breathless! You used great detail and description, and I was moved by your word choice! This poem really spoke to me:) The only nitpick ...
Feb 27, 2015 -
Re: Girlfriends, Boyfriends, and Younger Brothers
Hey PickledChrissy! This is a really cute story! I can't wait to see where this leads to. My first nitpick is run-on sentences. You have quite a few within the ...
Feb 26, 2015 -
Re: Prologue
Wow! I was hooked on this story/prologue right from the start! You did a great job of capturing the reader's attention and keeping it all the way through! This is ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: The Story of Us Chapter Two: Andy
Yay! More story! :D haha So here goes an attempted review... First of all, I love the overall plot and idea of the story. There's so much potential in it, ...
Feb 22, 2015