lizzifer

The transition ryhme in this seems to me to be a bit off.. I love the poem and how it flows a bit and I love the whole topic it ...

I feel like I almost understand the narrator's position!! I feel the mental breakdown and her morale breaking. It's flawless except for I agree with Classy and that one word, ...

I do believe you (and your friend!) deserve a round of applause!! I felt the emotion (or at least I thought I did..) when I read them! And yes I ...

Dear Person, This is completely AWESOME (like no joke). I seriously want to go look for some (people always say if I was in a horror movie I would die ...

HI!!!!!! ok now for a wee bit of a review... Should I write a love poem Since it's Saint Valentine's day? Should I propose to dance or to sing Or ...

i am an official depressed person and it made me quite happy that you got your point as a writer across. I LOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVE it ( way too much..

im really happy that you had the nerve to post something! I hate when people are all "this sucks! Im going to delete it before anyone lays eyes on my ...

When I read it the first timee....I loved it When I read it the second time I got the image that the pen just ran out of ink When i ...