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The last parts and the middle was the best parts.

I just wanted to cry when I great paragraph 5 and 6 it was so powerful I just wanted to cry so bad. It has so much detail and emotion ...

General sighed, staring at the two boys. “That may be for the best. I don’t think these two would go full strength on her if they had to.” Has some ...

thanks

I really like this poem my favorite part is Take me there... Because, How beautiful life must look without the distractions, without the interference, that tear the eyes from what ...

Thank you and I will take your advice and change my poem

Thank you for the piece of advice and I reviewed your works to

Thank you I wrote it as sermon.

Thank you for the great piece of advice I will surely take it into thought. You see I wrote this when I was about 10 years old so I thought ...

Yeah it is supposed to say that and I will fix line 5

Thank you so much for the review I have fixed the places where you said I messed up.

I will read your stuff not tonight because I am so sleepy so I will Tommorw but thank you for the review the next thing I am going to put ...

I love it it is really great I am new here and if you could add me that would be great knowing that you are friends with my sister ( ...

I really like this poem although there could be a few touch ups but IT was really good.

This is a great poem and no I am not trying to get some points so yeah. How do I any why