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Re: Sweep the Sky:Chapter One
Boy with wings huh. This is rather interesting, so I will poke my head every so often to see were this goes. In any event I will do my best ...
Apr 27, 2015 -
Re: Islands
Hmm. .. I suppose being short is something that would normally count against a poem, but if it remains effective in its expression then…who cares! All in all, this is ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Where am I?
Oh my, such mystery! Although it sounds as if the narrator is in some sort of purgatory, or at the very least, they feel like the room they are in ...
Apr 25, 2015 -
Re: The World of Secrecy Chapter One "Draft"
WHA! Why did you stop at such an intimate moment!? YOU sir/madam, are one wily individual. In any event I am here to offer a (presumably) not very great review. ...
Apr 25, 2015 -
Re: Black Eyes #2
Wow… that vendor was kind of cruel, and for little reason no? Hope he gets his comeuppance and by the sound of it he will. Oh well, here for a ...
Apr 2, 2015 -
Re: Trials of a Master Thief: Chapter 1
Hello there, I’m here for kind of, sort of review. I am still new to this so please forgive me if this doesn’t help. First the good: Right off the ...
Feb 17, 2015 -
Re: The Crown Thief Ch. II Pt. 1
Hello there. I only wish to point out a few errors as well as suggest a way to make the words flow a bit better. General review: Over all I ...
Feb 16, 2015