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Hey little author here, This totally brought back memory's from my childhood. I thought it had beautiful discription and it was very smooth and fluent. "dessert not only..." Dessert should ...

Hey Little Author here, I absolutely love this piece. The first stanza just puts it all off in a bang. I can see that you put a whole lot of ...

Hey Little Author here, I absolutely L-O-V-E this piece. It's beautiful and it's a perfect winter piece. I really thought it was amazing how it was so short, but yet ...

Hey Little Author here, So this isn't really review since this isn't a story but I do see some problems. 1. I'm just plain old confused. Some of your word ...

Hey Little Author here, I really liked this story. Though it did have some pros and cons Pros: It had a good middle beginning and end. The climax was in ...

Hey Little Author here :) I really enjoyed this poem. I loved the short stanza's, thought where the coma's really necessary? It was a very deep topic, although you covered ...

This surprised me. I was expecting just another poem, but no. This one really sucked me in. At some points though, I did have to re-read a stanza. I was ...