litsnowflake

I thought this was really cool ! (Let me just say that my grammar is terrible. So I wont be reviewing and critiquing any of yours haha.) Anyway, this was ...

awww thank you so much! I'm happy you liked it. I thought I'd incorporate some Jamaican language in my poem to make it more interesting. Their language is basically broken ...

oh wow! I love that you broke it all down for me thank you :) I was only explaining what my poem was about though. I love to write with ...

WOW! I loved this :) really good imagery. This has such a soft and pretty flow to it. awesome! however, I feel as though you could have been more descriptive ...