lisalulu09

Whoo, first comment! :P I think this has to be the best written part so far, in my opinion. :D That's all I can say really. :D Oh, and Elliot ...

I've just read all of this and it is utterly amazing ! :D I love your writing style and the plot and Lily's voice and everything Ha ha. :P You ...

I've just read both parts of this chapter, and I'm loving it! :D Apart from the grammar problems, which xDudettex (Hi! :D) pointed out already, everything is fine. :)

There are a lot of typos, mainly in the speech - no full stops, mainly - but apart from that, it's brilliant. I love your writing style! :D Are you ...

This is really, really good. Very sweet! :D There are some typos and the tenses are mixed up in places, but apart from that, it all seems ok! :)

This is BRILLIANT. :D :D :D You managed to write in Stephanie Meyer's style so well, I felt like it could actually be a part of the series. :D Keep ...

This is brilliant. :D I love how Rose has turned out to be completely different to how I expected her to be - a younger version of Hermonie. xD I ...

I loved this. I thought it was very sweet and I loved how you described their relationship. :D A few things: There are quite a lot of typos. Personally, I ...

This is very, very good! :D Is it part of a story or a standalone piece you wrote. :) :smt020 Lisa :smt020 Listening to: 'Why Does It Always Rain On ...