lilymoore

To be honest, I really don’t understand this piece. It seems to lack direction and connection. And that is in fact the real problem I find in this. The paragraphs ...

I really enjoyed reading this and I definitely agree with the fact that this would make an amazing story if written well. I can really envision a very early 1900's ...

Yay, a dream to stumble across this piece. I’ve been absent for a while and in need of something short to review to get myself back in the swing of ...

Hey, Nutty! I’m sorry this took so long. Ha, I have but one weakness and it is boys. Sorry. Well, I know plenty of people have reviewed already but I’m ...

Hey, I found something short. Ha, I love short. :D The still summer night was silent. Make up your mind here. Option 1: “The summer nice was still.” Or option ...

So, first off, no need to apologize for anything of the vampire/werewolf category. It’s one of my absolute favorites. Anyway, I guess I’ll just start, huh? I looked over at ...

This was very good. The construction is unique and the lack of capitalization almost seems to soften the poem (in a positive way). I especially liked that last italisized portion. ...

Wow, this was irrefutably good. At first I wasn’t sure what to expect but it pulled me in from “Dear Lucy,” all the way to, and I must commend on ...

So, I’m just going to get to the point of things right now. I was really confused…but only at first because of the writing style. It’s unlikely that something like ...

*bows graciously* The name’s lily and I’ll be reviewing for you today. I felt as though I were in the clouds. I was being pulled up the stairs by a ...

Hello, the name is lily and I’ll be you’re reviewer today…hehe, what you start doing when you’re a waitress. Okay, on to the review. The first thing I’m going to ...

Okay, so here it goes. But I am going to warn you that my reviews are a bit unique. Isaac climbed the stairs warily, his fingers gently intertwining with Lara’s. ...

Yeah, I’ve found something to review that hasn’t been reviewed. It’s sort of my thing. “Sammi, you mean the world to me, you’re so beautiful.” He whispers, Quick punctuation problem ...

Woo, first review! Yeah me! Well, after reading this, I figured that the simplest way to do this is to point out a section where I see a problem, I’ll ...

Well, I don't normally read poetry but I saw this up in that little box in the top right hand and I figured I should check it out. Anyway, I ...