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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Orpheus

    Hey Conrad. I heard through yrclever that this was supposed to be good and I thought I would come check it out. The tombstones stood in the grey mist like ...

    Mar 25, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Like a Button: Parts 1 & 2

    Hi there, my name is lilymoore and I’ll be your reviewer today. :D (1)They helped save me when I was drowning. My father had died the previous year and my ...

    Mar 23, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: I'm Sorry, Sally Lolly

    It was really the whole "Sally Lolly" thing that made me want to read this, mostly for the name. Its a rather unique name, huh? :D But this is good ...

    Mar 23, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: house-2

    Okay, so I found it. And I hope you understood my PM about the coding and stuff for links. The first thing I’m going to say is that the names ...

    Mar 23, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Under the Circumstances

    A windy whistle from behind me catches me of guard as I turn around to have the beet-red eyes of a shade glaring at me. “Yes?” I manage to screech. ...

    Mar 19, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Empath

    This was beautifully executed and I couldn't find any flaws in this piece. It grabbed me almost immediate just cause I have always had an interest in ESP abilities and, ...

    Mar 17, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Desmond Carter

    Because this is so short it’s definitely hard to give a very detailed opinion on this. But that first line definitely had me pulled in, even if it doesn’t completely ...

    Mar 17, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: I'll Always Be Weak

    I want to say first off that this is a wonderful piece and the meaning behind it is teeming with beautiful significance to plenty of people. And though I didn’t ...

    Mar 17, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Circumstantially Incorrect

    First off, I want to remark on how silly most people would think it would be to pull an excerpt out of the middle; I, however, think its freaking F.A.B.U.L.O.U.S. ...

    Mar 17, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Untitled.

    So here's the review. Sorry I'm a meany. But I didn't put a lot of time into this for you. Almost 3 hours went into review this and I really ...

    Mar 10, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Breakdown-Prologue. First Edit

    Hiya, I’m here with your review. Sorry it took me a while. I ended up, just, not touching my computer but I’m very sorry. Anyway, here it is. I see ...

    Mar 10, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: How to Forget ch 1

    First off, I want to apologize for taking as long as I did to get this up and posted. My week has been a little hectic with work and school. ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Heaven on Earth

    Here with your review, as requested. I just want to start off by saying that my reviewing style is a little different. Instead of just going in and pointing out ...

    Mar 5, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Russian Roulette

    Wow, this was really really good. Like, at first, I didn't know what I was getting into when I decided to read this because at first I thought it was ...

    Feb 28, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: Them

    This is really vibrant, awakening piece, maybe not the most original but by far, very well pulled off. I'm not much for spotting grammar errors though one did grab me. ...

    Feb 26, 2009


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