lilymoore

Okay, so it took me a while to find another piece of yours too review but I finally did. As it turns out…the points were just reset and I want ...

Hi Texan. The disclaimer promised me melancholy and sadness and I want to read even more now. Not only that, but the title is very attention grabbing. His breath smells ...

Hey there Sunny, I’m here with the first of the two reviews I owe you. Let’s jump right to it. The room was dark. This is so short and simple, ...

Hey Eimear, I’m sorry it took me so long to get this reviewed for the contest and all, I’ve just been crazy busy, you have no idea. Anyway, this isn’t ...

So, I know it took me a while to get to the reviewing of your submission but I’m here and the contest results will be posted soon. Our daughters look ...

Hello 200397, it’s lilymoore and I’ve finally gotten to my review of your contest submission (took me long enough, huh) but I’m here finally and ready to get this done. ...

Hey there WhiteTiger93. I know you entered my contest quite some time ago and in fact, it ended some time ago, but I’ve been rather busy lately with finals (didn’t ...

Hey there timeless. I’m sorry it took me a while to get around to reviewing this piece. Things have been a little hectic lately. ”Hello, Lucy. Come and take a ...

Hi Coffee_and_Karma, the names lilymoore, but you can just call me lil, or lily, whatever works. First off, I really should not be creeping in the forums because I have ...

Hey Blink, sorry it took me a little while to get around to reviewing this, I just finished finals (and my sophomore year!) so things have been a little hectic. ...

Hiya Mars. I need somewhere to go for the night, that’s certain. First off, this is an awesome opening line. It tells us what’s going on without giving away the ...

Hiya! So, I’ve been stalking all of Cal’s Contest submissions and it seemed about time to review this one. First off, “Face Down” is a wonderful song. I’m a huge ...

Hey, I’m sorry this took me so long to get around to reading. I had stopped checking my “Will Review” thread because I hadn’t gotten any response to it in ...

For being a creation of insomnia and a sugar high, this isn’t bad. Actually, I found it rather comical yet thought provoking (but only a little.) In fact, it was ...

Hey Megan, as asked, here I am. First off, I want to say, that I’m not generally the best poetry critique but I’ll try my best. But you don’t have ...