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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Wicked Wishes

    Hiya, I’m here because, well, it’s not cool to not review. Also, 100th Review. Awesome, I know right. So for the sake of being thorough, I’m going to do this ...

    Jun 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bonnets, Bows

    Hey Demi, here because I begged for something to review and well, you know the sad story. and you can't tame the grey because it lives already – Okay, the ...

    Jun 8, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Monkey Bars

    Hey there, not going to worry about silly introductions, I just want to review. When we were younger, I remember sitting on the monkey bars in the snow. We took ...

    Jun 8, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Meriadossa [1]

    Hey Esme, I have no idea what the title of this story means, but oh well, I’m reading and reviewing it! The air was cold and stale, sunk deep with ...

    Jun 8, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Mother, May I?

    Eeeek! Another story by our wonderful Evi, I must read it or else I may fall into a great abyss of not knowing. So first off, I love your stuff ...

    Jun 7, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Cold Moon [Prolouge]

    Hey Dr. (don’t criticize, its shorter). Peanut made some amazing points but I wanted to help reinforce those points and give some advice. It was evening, warm and breezy. In ...

    Jun 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Random Randomness!!!!!!!

    I adore the simple randomness of this whole shebang. Besides, who doesn't like things that are randomly random. And I for one will not rag on you for being random. ...

    Jun 7, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Seashells

    Hey there newbie, how’s it going? I’m going to keep it short and simple with this review and just make some comments on the more important things. 1. First off, ...

    Jun 6, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The United States of Apocalyptica(working title) Prologue

    Hey there Tim. First off, let me just say that this looks just a bit scary with such big paragraphs. EEK! Now I should probably get on with the reviewing. ...

    Jun 6, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Absalom, my son

    Hey Kylan. First off, I want to say that I always enjoy reading your stuff, even if I don’t always review it but I’m feeling ambitious tonight so here goes. ...

    Jun 6, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: When Death Comes A'knocking.

    Hey there, its lilymoore and yes, I’m stalking Cal’s contests entries. It was Friday, a cold, windy and hostile Friday , when Saleem received the letter. That little comma helps ...

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Sheila

    OMG Mars this is awesome. I’ve never read anything like this with the one sided dialogue. At first, I didn’t exactly know what was going on but then I was ...

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Canned Peaches and Paper Sacks

    Evi, I love reading your works, there always so amazing and they always have such an impact on me so I had to review this. One year hadn’t taken its ...

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Single Flaw

    Hi there chips, I’m here and I’m gonna review, get used to it. So first off, I love the song choice. I’m not generally a huge Paramore fan but the ...

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Lavender Napkin Rings

    There isn’t a single bad thing I can say about this piece. It reminds me a bit of my dad and my step mom when they got married except that ...

    Jun 1, 2009


Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory.
— Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)