lilymoore

Hey there, ilovemyboys! So, I would nitpick through this but I would be pointing out the same two things over and over again. Instead, I’ll just cover the two big ...

Hehe! Told you I was reviewing it! But Family Guy...well…it’s just so funny. Hehe. Right off the bat, though, this reminded me of that YouTube video of that cute little ...

Hey there, Sierra! So, I won’t be too super intensive with this because I really want to focus on one big thing (the ending.) Although I didn’t read Pretty Little ...

Rosa was flying around the room, willing all the numb and frozen , useless parts of her body to find her car keys. This might seem tiny and useless but ...

Hmm, this is definitely different, Kat. But in a way, I kind of like it. Actually, I got quite a chuckle out of it. One thing I really should point ...

And I’m back again, Wicked Destiny! She was tall at five foot five … I guess I figured I’d bring this up first because to most people, five foot five ...

Hey there, Wicked Destiny! I won’t be a drag and sift through a bunch of nitpicks. Rather, I’ll just go over some of the bigger things. There is no interesting ...

Back again! Hey there, horses! First off, some nitpicks! The one in the cell numbered 4815. This is a little odd but for some reason, “the” feels repetitive (it is ...

Hey there, horses! Here for the first of two reviews! Since it’s for a contest, I’ll focus a good deal on nitpicks and such, okay! He leapt onto Raidnk, the ...

Hey there, beanut! I would be happy to make a grammar run through of your piece. And holy wowsers has it been a long time since I even thought about ...

Hey there, Splodey! *snugs* I promised you a review and gosh darn it, I’m going to give it to just took a lot longer than I thought it would. Right ...

You know, I always wanted to do something sort of like this just to be a pain and copy-cat you. :P But really, these are great, Cal. A must need ...

Hey there, Rainbow Snail! After reading this, I officially need to start following you! *follows* Mostly because the way you worded this poem is just brilliant! But I do have ...

Hey there, best friend! Hehe! So, I will say right off the bat that this is pretty interesting because you have what I would say is 50 percent a good ...

Well hello there, sleep kitty! Welcome to YWS! Have a panda! hehe! So, I will say right off the bat that this was a little difficult to read because the ...