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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Something Real

    Hey there Amy. So, I have to say right off the bat that you did a wonderful job here as far as grammar and such went and you definitely have ...

    Jul 6, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: .

    Rosey Posey! You wanted an opinion on this so here I am. I’m not going to nitpick though as Stella took care of that. Obviously, this is a very personal ...

    Jul 6, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: flesh : part one.

    Hey, I’m here. I was about to review but had to mow the lawn. Anyway… First of all, your introduction was brilliant and the power within it is so heartfelt ...

    Jul 6, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Dreams Really Do Come True…Kinda

    *jabs jabber* Hey, it’s reviewin time. Rosey had some wonderful things to say but I did have a couple of more to bring up. The orange tabby didn’t clean her ...

    Jul 5, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: An Autobiography

    Hey spike, here as requested. ^^ Nitpicks say something what we want everyone to hear, etc. I think you meant “that” The feelings I have accumulated in me for my ...

    Jul 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Than You

    Hey unster. I read this way back when you first wrote this but I never got around to writing down a review for it. But I’m here now, I just ...

    Jul 3, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: Tick. Tock.

    Hey cnvalambrosia, never fear, lily here…on second thought, that might be cause to fear. ^^ grrr So I won’t nitpick because there isn’t much to nitpick upon here. In fact, ...

    Jul 2, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Compulsive Disorder of the Obsessive Variety II

    Hey part two. Awesome! Because I didn’t find any nitpicks grammatically or style wise aside from one, and that was your typo which was already pointed out, I’m just going ...

    Jul 2, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: .

    Rosey! I figured that this would be a great story to make my first review as a purple. So here goes. Little Things I was it desperately. I think you ...

    Jul 2, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Untitled

    Hey there shy! So, I checked out the site first of all and it looks awesome. There’s not much there, but it looks very cool. Anyway, on to the review. ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: You Soft and Lonely/You Lost and Lonely

    Hey Kiki! So, we just became friends like, 5 minutes ago and I figured I would review a little more of your stuff. So here it goes! waves of brunette ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: He Wasn't Too Old For Her

    Wow, does this sound just like my high school. Our school just hired a new computer/accounting teacher and he sounds just like the teacher in the story. Tall with a ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Waiting

    Hey there. Jas Now the long dish of gravel What exactly is this dish of gravel? It sounds pretty, but I haven’t the slightest what it is. Other then that, ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: What Have We Tonight?

    Evi! Oh I love reading your stuff. I had no idea you even did poetry. First off, when I started this, I had no idea what a pantoum was but ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: My Life ( Heavy Metal)

    First off, high fives for metal. *high fives* Yeah, corny, but whatever. ^^ Okay, this immediately reminded me of Hail to the Geek by Deaf Pedestrian with your references to ...

    Jul 1, 2009


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