lilymoore

Hello there A.M. I don’t think we’ve ever been formally introduced. The names lily. *bows* To the reviewing! Hazzah! The four year old girl hugged the blood soaked teddy bear ...

Hey sugarxsnow! Okay, so I’m generally not the greatest reviewer of poetry but practice makes perfect so I’ll give it my best! Nor bronzed, rum-filled confections Can never fail to ...

Hey there LW! It’s reviewing time! His drawl was slow and drawn out, as if he was having trouble saying what he thought. ‘Drawl’ implies that his speak ‘was slow ...

Hiya Evi!!! I just downed my fourth Mellow Yellow of the day but I figured I could slip a quick review in before I start bouncing off of stuff. I ...

OverEasy makes some great points in her review, she always doest. But I might as well give you a few more pointers, right? First off, this does come across as ...

Why hello there Mister Rice, it is ever so nice to see you. *bows* Shall we begin with the review? Juliana hoped that it would not leave before she had. ...

Yay, it’s time for part two! Not since his grandfather had vanished, in fact – he was but a boy at the time, but he still remembered sitting by the ...

Hey there Jigs. Since I saw part two, I decided I might as well do part one first. :D Twisted copper wire braided sapphire shards; The red lens were his ...

Hi there RW! So…a watermelon…this aught to be interesting. :D …touching mine as she giving me the water melon. Shouldn’t it be ‘watermelon’ as one word? She didn't answer to ...

Wow, Aush, it took me longer to get to this than I figured it would. Math has been preoccupying a large portion of my life lately. *ish* And so did ...

Guess who’s back, back, back; Back again, gain, gain, Lily’s back, back, back…okay, I’m too white to be doing that so I’m just going to review. :D Nitpicks Remember your ...

Hi there Rosey! I saw part two was up and figured I should review part one before part two. This has been, for the most part, very nitpicked over though ...

Hi there Margaret! *licks ear* Okay, right away, I just love things that are based on dreams. After all, the only place that can ever bring more inspiration than the ...

I’m baaaaaack! Nitpicks The buildings look about the size of people, and the people look like ants. Okay, I’ve got an issue here with parallelism. You’ve got these two similar ...

Okay, Shina, this is officially all really crazy! I only caught one nitpick which is this one: Chandler wakes from [his] slumber and rises to his feet. Just added ‘his’ ...