lilymoore

Hey there, tkpejb! (by the way, autocorrect is baffled by your username) Anyways, hello there. I won’t be too nitpicky with this because I have two huge things I want ...

Wow, I just typed this in pretty font but then forgot all about the fact that this is going to go into the forums just like everything else…silly me. Anyways, ...

Hey there, Anger Management! So, you have an alright poem here but right now, it seems like your focus was more on pretty words and phrases than on the poem ...

Hey there, Em! I remember how much I loved this song when I first heard it long ago. I was actually a little confused right away, by the song because ...

Heya dani! I am here…so I recommend turning and running now. *is kidding of course* So, I actually rather enjoy tackling rhyming poetry for one major reason: people have a ...

Wow, it’s been a very long time since I’ve touched a script so excuse me if I’m a little rusty. One little nitpick that I spotted (though I couldn’t tell ...

Hey there, JoJo! So, overall, this is definitely a really awesome piece of cover art. But there are a few things that do bother me about it. First and foremost ...

Good evening, Kylan. It is always a pleasure and an honor to get to take my red pen to your work. Actually, I really think of it as a test ...

Hey there, Amber. First and foremost, welcome to the site. Second, thank you so much for sharing this poem with us because I know that remembering things like this can ...

Hey there, Metal. So I’m hoping that, even if my input is a little delayed, it might hopefully still be valid. I won’t sit here and pick at all of ...

You’re quite right, I think, snickers, when you said that you could make it longer. Well, not so much longer but I definitely think you could flesh it out some ...

Hey there, Splodester! So, Twin and peanut covered plenty in their reviews but I figured I would pick a bit at line breaks for you! Don’t worry, there weren’t many. ...

Hey there, AlexT! Here for at least one of many reviews I definitely owe you! (you can just shoot me a PM with links to the pieces you would like ...

Hey there, Smiley! So, I won’t dig into this with nitpicks too deeply because I want to concentrate on something else. I do have a few little things though: But, ...

Kat! *snugs* This is me pillaging your poem. :D Okay, I probably won’t actually pillage your poem but I do want to point out a few little nitpicks first and ...