lilymoore

Hi there yuri! *hands over a banana* It’s a banana bomb! And I’m the only one who can disarm it! Mwahaha! Okay…I’m going to review now… Good thing, I didn’t ...

Hi there grigoris! Well…hmm…a letter…hmm. *ponders* it must be really boring for you. Oops. Be careful to capitalize. My dear friend I really don't know how to describe my feelings. ...

Hey there Kat! Oh, and *jaw hits the floor* The cuts in my paper thin, paper skin Vasticity is right here. I mean, I hate repetition. But this just sounds ...

Aww, I like this a lot! And really hope you continue to post lots of these chapters on YWS and that you PM me and let me know whenever a ...

Hello emmy, I’m pretty sure we haven’t met before. *shakes hands* I’m Lily! Here, have some of my cake! *hands a piece of cake* before placing it in front of ...

Hi there, iwrite! My childhood walks away, while I play with plastic toys and get entertained by those same people. I don’t know why, but ‘get’ just sounds dirty here. ...

Hiya, I’m lilymoore, your friendly neighborhood reviewer! Firearris is definitely right. Punctuation is all that this poem lacks. Sometimes you have to look at the poem as if it wasn’t ...

Hi Dante! Come meet me where the shines. All I can say here is HUH??? I have to say, this sounds a little sad and kind of ‘emo.’ Like your ...

Dalliance, it’s very nice to make your acquaintance. everyone is distant I know there is a rule about this, I just can’t remember the name of the rule. But you ...

Hello Howler. I don’t believe we’ve ever met but I’m Lily, your friendly neighborhood reviewer. But it does look like Vasticity covered all of the basics of playwriting so I’ll ...

Pingun, how do you do...again. *bows* Okay, I read the first edition but I have to say, this could still really use some depth. Delve into everything about this. Touch ...

Well you can trust, Rina, Violet. She’s always right. About everything . It’s actually a little creepy. But this had a very emotional feel to it and at the same ...

Hey there Austenite. Since you reviewed “Hemlock” for me, I figured I would review something for you! And I’m going to start with a few nitpicks. Coffee will never be ...

Hi there KailaMarie, Lily here to review. You laugh and skip and run like all the other 5 year olds Something I should mention is that numbers should never be ...

Sargsause, hello there! The name’s Lily and I’ll be your reviewer today! Okay, two little nitpicks. The crowded sidewalks of the Fashion District moved like an inky wave of multicolor ...