lilymoore

Hi inkwell. Break me the sunset in a cup; This is actually the only line I don’t really like. Somehow, I feel like exchanging ‘break’ with ‘give’ would make this ...

Spork Punk, I officially love your username. And I’m Lily! *gives a cookie* Welcome! And I’m not just here to tell you that. I’m here to review you as well. ...

When I started reading this, knowing that this was for Jen’s contest, I was like…okay, where’s the orange. It took a while for you to get to it, but you ...

Hello radiate, Lily here as requested! *dances on your face* teehee! I see you took up Empress on the challenge. :D And I have to say, that as a poem, ...

Hello Autuer, here as asked! So, I am going to be a little nitpickie and point out the things I saw that really stood out. Her earphones were pushed in, ...

OMG, Always, I haven’t seen you in forever! *pounces* Well, you definitely did a good job of getting all of the prompts in there. Because this was mostly for humor, ...

Okay, lean close, I have a secret that will make this a billion times more epic. Are you leaning? Good. The secret: Start with Action! This is good. You have ...

Hey peanut! Here because you asked. And because I want to snug you! *snugs* Quickly she pops it in her mouth and swallows, gulping loudly. You should probably throw ‘it’ ...

Zoray! Horay! Hehe, they sound alike. Anyways…a few nitpicks. Tiff appeared about to say something , but, before she could, Eric had pulled her out of the chair, and dragged ...

Hey blackbird! It’s Lily, your number one fan! *waves a big foam finger* :D Okay, first off, a few little itty bitty nitpicks. His finger flex. It should either be: ...

*fan girl scream* OMG, its Jooon! :D Also, the whole "eyes" to "tides" thing. You've got great rhyme going there, but you don't have that deep of a connection. I'd ...

Gryph, this is…um…different. Not bad different, just hard to really review different. I definitely like the take on the contest idea with this. It shows a very innocent reflection of ...

Hello Mr. Knightly! So, I saw the title of this and I couldn’t resist reviewing it. I’ve never been a huge Zelda fan but I did start playing Twilight Princess ...

Hi June! I don’t think we’ve ever officially met. I’m Lily! Hi. *waves like an idiot* Okay, I really have to give you props on this poem for one very ...

Hi there, soft! I’m Lily. Nice to meet you. :D First off, I should say, you should totally stop by the Welcome Mat and introduce yourself to the rest of ...