lilymoore

Hey there, Maddy! I swear, little brothers can come up with the most interesting things. Sure, there is some cliché in there, I’ll give it that, but it’s still sweet. ...

Hi there, cannon! So, right off the bad (and I haven’t read any of this yet but the spoiler and the title but is it meant to be “The Concept ...

Hey Vamp! Because I don’t see much wrong with this, I’m going to go over this stanza by stanza. One I like the wording in this. And even in the ...

Holy long, Skins! I mean, you said there were plenty of reviews but like, you could have warned me. :P Anyways, I'm not going to do any grammar nitpicks since ...

Hey there, draax. I like what you’ve got started but I think you’re in need of a good deal of work on this at the same time. I think, when ...

I’m here Eli! (Note to self, I need to get around to reading more of ItD. The flash drive I’ve been carrying it around on is actually in my pocket ...

Percy! *noms* Because I’m me, and because I’m first up at the bat, I’m going to nitpick a little bit. with lopsided letters and corners that frayed. I’m a huge ...

*pounces on Aquadoodle!* Hey there, first customer! All in all, I’m a little tied on whether I like this or not. The imagery and the word choice bruised my jaw ...

This is adorable and so cute. I'm glad to see something on YWS made with the pure, loveable intent of putting a smile on a face. Thanks! Also,don't pick your ...

Hey there, drama! (I think we met once or twice, maybe in chat, but I can’t be sure so if I haven’t introduced myself already, I’m Lily. Or Captain Lileh!) ...

Hey there, Victorian, nice to meet you! Okay, I’ll be short with this and say that you’re really blending prose and poetry here which can make reading and classifying and ...

I have to be honest with you, Sporkie, and say that right now, I definitely don’t see this being Lit Journal material. Right now this doesn’t really feel particularly poetic. ...

Hey there, Knightly! Lils here! Because I like this, a lot, I really want to make a few word choice suggestions, most especially with the first stanza. You taste like ...

Hey there, octocoffee! We’re happy to have you back, even if you don’t get right back onto the review-wagon. No worries! Really, I have a few suggestions I wanted to ...

Hey there emoinpink! First off, as far as your flow problem goes, I recommend checking out “Flow” (by Jon) as well the other link he provides inside of the tutorial ...