lilymoore

Hey there, lele! Instead of being too terribly nitpicky, as BlackSheep has covered plenty of that, I’ll do this stanza by stanza! First Stanza So, this is a great lead ...

First off, Eli, where in the world do you live that you can say it's warm out? *is shivering* Right off the bat I really liked this. Its clean and ...

Eep, hiya Upile. So, I didn’t know quite what to expect when I first clicked on this. Actually, the title had me a bit confused but I have to say, ...

Heya Stel. I don’t think you and I have ever been properly introduced but…well, I’m me and you’re you and I do suppose things will remain that way for a ...

Heya Eli! So, as you mentioned up above me, you really should expand this. One thing that would be nice to hear more about is how Jerry died. He was ...

Hey there, Jojo. Here per request. *bows* So, I won’t sit around nit picking. There really isn’t anything too pick. You have a lovely way of writing. It’s not too ...

Heya Skins! “This isn’t the middle ages, Dad. Most girls my age are worrying about collage, not finding some guy to marry.” “Don’t use words like that; you’re not American.” ...

Percy! *pounces* I feel like I can't touch them, like each brush takes away dead skin from my house onto my black sleeves, slowly being stained with pure. When you ...

Oi! Sorry it took me a little longer to get to review these. I’ve been shopping for the last two days…bad excuse, probably, but oh well. So, I found myself ...

Heya Shrubs! So, I find myself wondering about at first paragraph at the beginning. It comes off of the bat as seeming more telly then showy and you don’t want ...

Heya Tiff! Of course I have time for you! First off, have I mentioned how much I love your willingness to put such personal pieces up on the internet for ...

Heya Jasmine! So, right off the bat, this reminded me of my bestie Taylor (minus the joint smokin’, bottle drinkin’ thing) with the rainbow hair and all, most especially the ...

Stellz, have I mentioned lately how much I luff you! Well, I at least love when you bring up anything Irish because for some reason it just makes me all ...

Well I see someone is thinking of Valentine’s Day! *points at poem and avi* (Oh dear, I’ll be alone for it again…not suprising.) Great, now you made me sad… But ...

Do you know why I love you, Eli? You don’t ask me to review super long stuff. All day today, everything I’ve been reviewing to clean out my WRFF thread ...