lil2020

First off wow. I feel like you did an amazing job with the placing of your line brakes. I love your word choices too. I feel like the way that ...

First I just want to say that I can relate to this poem so much. I think you did a great job with your line spacing and word choice as ...

WOW. This peace was amazing and i never wanted it to end. It was almost like a poem, but not. The first thing I would like to mention is that ...

First of wow. Even though your poem was short it drew me in from the first line. I love the way you described things like " Muscles I never knew ...

First of all this poem is amazing. I really like how your opening line pulls the reader in. I like how you used a lot of detail in explaining each ...

First of all I really enjoyed reading your poem. I like how your poem has good rhyme. I think that if you added or broke it up into stanzas it ...

I do not normally like reading poems, but yours just sucks me in. I really like how you used a lot of detail and really described what you where felling. ...