lightningbolt

What an interesting poem...I liked how you discribed what an illusion could be it was a small poem but very interesting enoyed it......its amazing how just a really small poem ...

I enjoyed your interesting was a meaningful poem I mean don't most people just stop and think sometimes about there life and whats I I doing well at school?. I ...

Hi Lightnigbolt here, nice poem it seemed so gentle and smooth to me the way you expressed your words in that light but suttle manner made me feel the visual ...

I like your imagination, like how you say.... "Rain fell from the darkened sky as piercing drops" your story is very interesting and very descriptive I like how you explain ...