lifeline

Woahhh I love it! This is going in a rlly interesting direction hehe it might just be me but i was not expecting that; it's so good tho! "She tapped ...

Woah, this is really cool!! I lowk forgot the actual definition of 'folly' but I'm assuming it's something like a fatal flaw. The rhyming scheme changing in the middle is ...

Oooh wow that cliffhanger is epic... I love it so much The word choice is really good; we were learning about connotations vs denotations in class yesterday lol so I ...

Yay, I love crime/thriller books! Will be awaiting new chapters eagerly, but since I'm a forgetful person, is it alright if you sent me a message or something every time ...

I like how the speaker is reflecting upon themself and seeing both viewpoints of the matter about roaches. I also absolutely hate roaches (although for the most part it's fear ...

Oh. Wow. I loved that a lot, really. I'm a sucker for angsty stuff so this is the sort of thing that I really enjoy. I'm not the best at ...

I haven't read any of the other stories haha but this was a really interesting collection of 5 stories! I'm already really sad about Gabriel's death, despite not knowing much ...

To be honest, I'm terrible at reviews, but I just wanted to say that this prologue is pretty well-written in my opinion. I didn't see any grammar/mechanical issues, except (maybe) ...