-
Re: Stress Test
I like how this is structured and the background brought into it. It's personal. It's also well-written and not what I first expected when I opened it up. A pleasant ...
Feb 4, 2014 -
Re: Bring to a slow boil
Short but effective. There's a sense of sadness to begin with which then becomes happiness. There's a story told by this poem. I especially like how it doesn't rhyme. Keep ...
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: For, when we are not creating(EDITED)
It's quite a heavy poem, isn't it? But it's very much open to interpretation. Anyone can see it has deep meaning to you, whether personal or emotional. There's no doubt ...
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: If words were watercolor balloons
The vocabulary in this is excellent and appropriately used. It is also open to much interpretation but has what I perceive as quite an emotive message between the lines. There ...
Feb 3, 2014
