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This is a good start and relatable. But, is this poem just meant to be only 4 stanzas because it's shorter than I expected. Not that it's bad, but I ...

Oh okay. Good story!

Great read!

No problem! Glad I helped! :)

Thanks for thr review! :)

Its okay. Thanks again for the review! :)

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Thanks for the review! :)

Thanks so much for the review! I was planning on editing the story tonight. This helped a lot. I will fix the things that you have pointed out. Again, thanks ...

Thanks for the review. I do struggle describing the emotions of the characters a little bit. I will add more to this later, though and after I edit it, I'll ...

You're welcome! :)

Lol! That was awesome! I loved it! Great poem! :)

Lol! That was awesome! I loved it! Great poem! :)