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Okay, whaaaaaat? This is pretty cool. I don't know if I'd label it as "horror" per se, because you don't focus much on the creepiness of Grace being dead. I ...

Hey!! First off, love your name. I also like using a typewriter. Did you write this with one? Okay, about the overall format: It's a very good length. We get ...

Woooooow, I loved this! The team is shaping up to be a classic group of misfits. Action, adventures, cool clothes...and I smell a jailbreak and a rooftop chase coming up. ...

Hey, me again. I just reviewed Chapter Eight and I didn't find this one until later. Eight is above average goodness, for your writing or others that I've seen here, ...

Hiiiiiiiiiii! Love this series. It's pretty original and I can't tell where it's set--your characters' names are vaguely Scandinavian or Asian and I can't place them, which is fun. Makes ...

Hi! Haven't done any reviews for a while, so I apologize if I'm a little rusty. Overall, I like the potential in this. Which is not to say that it ...

Ohmygoodness this is adorable. And hilarious. And adorably hilarious. And hilariously adorable. You know, you might take this and try to turn it into something you'd write now. You were ...

Hi! Lelu checking in for the first time in a long time for September Review Month! Viva la Nachos! Now, I have not read the other chapters of this book, ...

AWESOOOOME! Okay, I'm in the mythology lovers' club too and one guy (girl?) said there are no elves in Celtic. However, the sidhe, or fairies, are actually mostly human size, ...

Hi again. This was interesting. It usually is. I would put this in a spoiler but I don't know how, and I won't spoil too much. Gael goes for a ...

Hey, Lelu here again. This was an interesting chapter, though the plot could advance a little more while still introducing Gael and Haka (like Ilami killing Whatsisface). The story itself ...

Hey, this is good! It wasn't boring, and villains never win but they're interesting to read about. I spotted a bunch of punctuation errors but this happens to everyone; don't ...

Hey, Lelu working on the new series of reviews of this book. Firstly, I like how you refer to the wind and fire specialists as "blessed," which probably means blessed ...

Hey, this is Lelu, planning to review this whole book. This seems really cool, something I could get into. Dramatic, but not overly so. It has lots of potential. I ...

Hey, it's Lelu, your resident grammar Nazi. I don't know what this is supposed to be a fanfiction of, or maybe it was mislabeled, but it's good. I like that ...