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I didn't expect this poem to be so, BOOM, you know. Straight to the point, no leading you there, just pushing you. And I, for one, loved it. The meaning ...

This piece is beautiful and well written. The imagery and the way you arranged the words are what's best!!!! I enjoyed reading this!! Keep writing!! This was also a good ...

*Cries* This was beautiful, like a story in, let's just say, 30 seconds. The imagery and the way you described the sunsets, like watching a portable brain t.v, if that ...

Wow, this was beautiful, I really liked reading the ending. Again, as I have said many times, great imagery. Has this story ever been featured??

Wow, so she ran away and is with some random guy. Hehehe, I wonder what's going to happened next. I have to go read the next chapter!!!!! this is absolutely ...

You have amazing imagery, as I'm sure you know by now from your comments. Your an amazing writer, and I like what you've turned this series into. Good job!!!

Cliffhanger much. I didn't expect him to murder her, I thought he would just threaten her. Phew, this is a good story!!! Nice job. But, seriously though, your good at ...

Wow, I loved this. A history lesson in about 30 seconds. We are Egyptian We are dances of joy We are feet bouncing, lifted heads so high they create perforated ...

The rhymes were a little off, and the poem went by a little too fast. But all in all I loved reading it. It seemed like something light you could ...

I liked this poem, it had a homey feel to it. Like apple pie or orange juice. I loved the first stanza, it introduced your poem well. Your poem is ...

This is sad, but beautiful at the same time. you should definitely make this into either a novel or a series of poems. The was so good that I am ...

First off I would like to just say that I love your imagery I love it. This poem is beautiful and it has a summery feel to it. It feels ...

This poem rocks, really. The imagery and the way you describe this boy's pictures. I love the ending the most. I think this poem could be called Capture Hearts or ...

Your poem is awesome!! I love the first stanza and the last stanza, and the way you mixed up the meaning. So the poem is about surrendering to love? That's ...

I am a nerd, but I don't have any of the "nerdy" stereotypness,so okay, I love this so much!!! Your poem is awesome!! It was dunny, too!!