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Re: The Locket
i hope to collect lockets. But about the poem or whatever you call it. Amazing i like the soul of it. Did that happen to you not to be a ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Dream
okay okay okay you totally need to do something with that. Is it a moral or did someone really fall off of a building or something. either way, person. you ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: What Words?
true said and the words are even sadder than the moral. You need to make a poem book. or become a songwriter for one thing.
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Can't
so much emotion put into those rhyming words you should publish it I like it so much. I think that i would buy your book of poems.
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: "I Love You," You Said
awesomely true. it was amazingly awesome too. I love it. and i just rhymed.
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Bullets
short but sure. I like it you deserve applause for how much feeling you can put into your work with a few sentences. A part of being a writer that ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Daddy's Song
very poetic and very strong in feeling. I like that you can put those type of things in words. That is what writing is all about. I like it. You ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Fire and Ice
it was very detailed and it was also very heavy on the dramatic atmosphere which I love and I myself am trying to work on.
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Little Macey (0)
wow that was so wierd and also a little scary. Nicew atmosphere you set though.
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: A Son's Crusade (Part 1, Chapter 1)
i love the beginning as i said before. I also like medieval writing.
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: She's Not Me.
i like the song and i love the motive. soooo true
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: How's the weather
not that good
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: What Words?
I hope your love does echo eternally. i loved it. Really I did.
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: No. 6
i love french. I particulary love your lyrical poem. I love it. Really you should. like, publish it
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: I Am A Little Fly
I like it and I have a slight lishp its more like lissssssssssp with spit.LOL
Feb 10, 2011