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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The New Dawn; My Night.

    I actually really like this, it seems good to me. And the atmosphere of this poem reminds me somewhat of the beach. The calmness and the descriptions. I love it!!!! ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Sickened Mind

    This poem brought tears to my eyes, and I really think that it is good. My heart started to race as I continued reading, no exaggeration, trying to figure out ...

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Prince

    I really love the way you tell the tale of the prince, and the way you made the stanzas and the wording in the poem. I think it does have ...

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Its Of Stone Heart

    I really like this poem, it feels the heart with a bit of sadness and also happiness because there is someone out there that uses such beautiful metaphors, really they ...

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Long Poem for a Short Life

    This was a long, long, long poem and I wasn't going to read it at first because of that. But I am dealing with my laziness, and I really love ...

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Secret Life of Superheroes

    I love this, very funny. These are my favorite lines: They scrubbed and polished, straightened, mopped; Tidied, neatened, freshened, stopped … … Then dusted, ironed, folded clothes; Watered flower

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Regrets & Love

    I am here as you requested. I really love this and I think that you should make it a little longer, then it would be better. And maybe you should ...

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Haiku #1

    Lele, here. I really love this haiku. It sure is better than any attempts I've made at writing one. I have to say out of all of this poems haikcoolness( ...

    Mar 29, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: Stay Tuned

    I love scripts and I love this one, I think i have to say that my favorite character is Jason. I think that it could be a little longer, because ...

    Mar 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Wouldn't Mind, Being Blind

    Sometimes I envy the blind, too. I loved this, I love it because it is a great subject to write about. And sometimes, seriously, my thoughts wonder to the same ...

    Mar 28, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: Love is Kind?

    I really love this and the message. If I ever met with love, it would probably be something like this. I love this because when I was reading this it ...

    Mar 28, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: What is the Best Book you have read...

    I can't pick. Um mm, The Inkheart Trilogy by Cornelia Funke. Yes, that's it. I love her books, I shall read them over. :o :D

    Mar 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Ode To Zombies [contest entry]

    This captures the, creepiness of zombies. I was looking around the room as I read this. I am so glad zombies are not real *shudders* Typically, i don't watch any ...

    Mar 24, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Here There Be Dragons - 1

    I've been waiting to read this, and I wasn't disappointed. I mean who wouldn't like a good story about dragons? Dragons rock. I think that this was actually better than ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Beneath this smile

    I love, .love, love these lyrics. They are full of deep emotion and the lyrics are the type that I like. I love these lines: Deep in my heart, There’s ...

    Mar 23, 2011


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