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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sollicitus Intus - "Anxious Within"

    I like this poem, I like the descriptions in it. I didn't quite understand it, though. What is the motive of the poem and where did you get the idea ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Above the Lake

    I like this poem. really, I had no idea there was a like button but I am going to press it. I like the description and the nature in this ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Keep Moving

    It wasn't too painful to read but it was sad. I am not good on harsh reviews but it could do with more rhymes and more lines. I really like ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You and Me

    Oh I really like this poem. What is the inspiration for it? It is really poetic and nice and it has a nice rhythm sort of like song lyrics. I ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Colors

    This poem is really good, and I hope you guys win. I really think that the last three, umm, stanzas are the best. As far as my poetic eyes can ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: The song of my life

    I like these lyrics, the song of my life. You should really make it into a real song. Like, does it have a rhythm? Because I am sure with the ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That Sacred Slut

    It is really sad and the mood of the poem is dark. but it is definitely poetic. And I don't usually review this type of poems so I don't really ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Guardians At Night

    I haven't dealt with the loss of a person only the loss of a pet. And I held that pet dearly to my heart. He was the best, and I ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Serenity in Neutrality

    I like this poem, really good. It is sort of a riddle, but I like it. You should explain it farther, though and make it a little simpler because I ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: there she inscribed

    What is this poem about?? it is very descriptive and I like it. but what is it about? The moral, the motive and lastly where did you get the idea ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Seperation

    I really like this poem, it deals with separation. I haven't dealt in that situation before. I have experienced the death of a pet, but not separation from a friend. ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Japan

    I love this poem, it really describes what they must have went through. I saw it on the news, it was really sad. I can't imagine myself there, in that ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Park Bench Pageant

    Is this about littering? I am so guilty of littering. Really, sometimes I can't help it or I don't want to walk to the nearest trash can. Which might be ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: glory

    I really like this poem. But, what is it about? and what is the motive? I know I ask a lot of questions but thats how you get answers and ...

    Mar 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Would you care?

    This poem brings the s in sad. Seriously, where did you get the motive to do this? I could sense a lot of feeling in it. Its really sad and ...

    Mar 12, 2011


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