lauren16

I know this is from a while ago but I was looking at one of your poems then I just kinda clicked on this one and wanted to comment. :) ...

I loved this! And like everyone else has said, the title kind of grabbed my attention. But, what story would be called butts? It got me curious about it. This ...

Wow! I wish I could paint like this! It's really great. The colors you used are different, I like it. I also like the concept of the whole thing. The ...

This is really good. I like how you showed that Jesus had the Fruit of the Spirit. The way you broke it down and said how he had each thing ...

This is a really good poem and I agree with everything you are saying in it. Like in the saying "stick and stones may break my bones but words will ...

This is really good. And most people can relate to having a bad breakup so they can understand the feelings that you talk about here. I like the rhythm and ...

I love this! Your puppy sounds so cute :) The only thing is the capitalization. And I would change the last lines to Oh, how I love you, my caramel ...

This poem is good. I like how when the season changes so does the relationship. It's like a gradual change. I'm not good with punctuation and that kind of stuff ...