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Re: Our World
I really liked this. I think that this is a great way to show how friendships start in elementary school. How the outcasts seem to always find each other and ...
Jul 21, 2017 -
Re: A Bandaged Heart
I really like this piece. I could connect with the girl knowing what it's like to help others before yourself. I think you did an amazing job with describing the ...
Jul 20, 2017 -
Re: The world will move on
I found this poem full of emotion. I loved the ending especially and how the world still moves, even if we don't. I loved the point of view of the ...
Jul 20, 2017 -
Re: She Likes Girls
Hello! I liked the story. I think it could be a beautiful story if it were to be more. I don't want to sound rude, but I think the story ...
Jul 20, 2017 -
Re: The Tree
I like how you made the connection between the tree and you. I think it would be cool to write another, but as a person instead of a tree. Using ...
Jul 20, 2017
