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laurahoeffner

  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Our World

    I really liked this. I think that this is a great way to show how friendships start in elementary school. How the outcasts seem to always find each other and ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Other » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Bandaged Heart

    I really like this piece. I could connect with the girl knowing what it's like to help others before yourself. I think you did an amazing job with describing the ...

    Jul 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: The world will move on

    I found this poem full of emotion. I loved the ending especially and how the world still moves, even if we don't. I loved the point of view of the ...

    Jul 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: She Likes Girls

    Hello! I liked the story. I think it could be a beautiful story if it were to be more. I don't want to sound rude, but I think the story ...

    Jul 20, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Tree

    I like how you made the connection between the tree and you. I think it would be cool to write another, but as a person instead of a tree. Using ...

    Jul 20, 2017


In a dream you are never eighty.
— Anne Sexton