laughingfreakx3

That was a very cool poem. It was really creative too! But you need to go back and edit your spelling, if you haven't looked at the other reviews yet. ...

Its was good Linds! Its was definitely shorter that your usual but that's OK! I think you could add more to it and it could be really good! Maybe you ...

Bravo! That's was really good! In the beginning I was thinking, why did you name the poem once? Then I read on and it all fit together. You had great ...

hmmm.....I liked this one. In the first few verses it was kind of choppy and didn't seem right. But the rest flowed really well. It was a well written poem, ...

You should show and not tell more in the poem You told everything and there was no showing in it that would give it more spark I read it and ...

Your poem was really good for your first try.l Your rhyming was great too. But you should try to show and not tell next time, although you did show and ...