lancemccoy

I really like this poem. I find it really neat that you express your faith. I see a great longing for God in this poem. I know this is a ...

Hey Jordan! Thanks for the comment! I appreciate your honesty. Maybe I should stick to writing stories. I think I tried to hard to make the poem rhyme and didn't ...

That'd be awesome! Thanks for the comment!

I see what you mean. Unfortunately I don't have the musical talent to express it in a song though. But I do see what you're saying. Thanks for the comment ...

Hello, Thank you very much for the review. I appreciate it. I will try and make it longer and then repost it later. Thanks again!