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lalalucky

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: january's photographs were snowy white

    There's not really a "meaning" in the sense people think of, just descriptions of what i went through in January and my feelings on that written more abstractly. This poem ...

    Jul 1
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Gods

    from my NaPo thread. this was one of my favorites. words: My Gods, their hands compress my head deeper into my rest. I thank blood in my chest to never ...

    May 2
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: An Ode to the Great Exploding Turnip

    "oh heehee" ????!!!!!!! okay im obsessed

    Apr 9
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: things will be okay if you step into the woods

    aawww thank you so much!!!

    Apr 7
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: taste my silence [the way i tasted your betrayal]

    there is something i genuinely appreciate in how this poem commentates on the topic of apologies. like how verbal apologies can't lessen the pain that *you* had to take the ...

    Mar 28
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: sooner than later (happy birthday, darling boy)

    this amount of love pouring out from this piece is breathtaking. this is such a lovely read

    Mar 27
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Oh No, Apocalypse!

    hello fig :] !! Thank you for taking time out of your day/night to review my work! i appreciate your words & thoughts being shared here! i love that my ...

    Mar 26
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Your blood and greed (ambition of the mind)

    goodness. this is beautiful! this is a great read i enjoyed.. hoping more people will read this lovely work!

    Mar 25
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: things will be okay if you step into the woods

    hello cocteau! first off, thank you for taking the time to write a very thoughtful review. Is the speaker the pebble? the force throwing it? both? I think the ambiguity ...

    Mar 24
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: things will be okay if you step into the woods

    hello ash! i appreciate you taking the time to write a comment despite the lack of time you have! thank you very much for your review, i appreciate hearing your ...

    Mar 23
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: violets in winter

    such a short poem but still remains to be so heavy. the vagueness is pretty ominous, though the general idea of fragility through violets and loss through winter does make ...

    Mar 18
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: The Face

    gosh, this is such a whimsical poem in its tone & rhymes that manages to use ellipses to steady itself as it goes to make the pain of the lines ...

    Mar 18
  • Art » Romantic, General Re: MY VIEWS ON MODERN LOVE.

    this is a decent piece! it's very honest and expresses itself clearly without getting too lost, and is very specific in how it wants to represent the present by drawing ...

    Mar 18
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: My Black is Beautiful

    its very, very sweet to make a bhm poem! from one black folk to another, happy black history month to you as well

    Feb 23
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Oh No, Apocalypse!

    i appreciate your review so much, thank you for your very thoughtful words!

    Feb 12


Writing is my soul made tangible on paper.
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