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Hi, I was thinking that too. I still don't know how to put what she's running from into words. Some of the poem is metophoric so I thought I might ...

Hi, Thank you all so much for the comments. They all helped me out a lot. It's hard to find mistakes or silly stuff in your own writing. I usually ...

Hi, Is this a true story? If not then it should be in another section. Love, N

Hi, Thank you for the comment. -- A little raunch keeps a story realistic, but this read more like a Playboy than a novel. Everyone's in their underwear, and boobs ...

The only thing I cane say is wow! I love it and I can defiantly see it in chapters some day. Love, N

Hi, People please comment, I need all the help I can get on this novel :) Love, N

Hey, Thank you for the reviews. I just fixed it up. My computer is down, but I do have chapter 2 and 3 completed. It's at my friends house, but ...

Hi, Thank you for the review! There were a few things that you were not very clear about. 1.Brooke took a small sip of her wine and smiled at her ...

Hi, I really need people to review this for me. I need to know if I should still keep writing. If it is okay to go on with this. PLEASE ...

Hi, Thank you for all the comments.

Hi, I know there is a lot of spelling mistakes and for some reason our teacher did not correct them. You can correct them if you like but it will ...

Hi, Thank you for the tips. I will go fix them right away. Not to sound like a cry baby, but I am a little offended by this. This is ...

Hi, Thanks for your replies. I will go fix it up asap. Love, N

This isn't a story. It's an actual, well, I guess confession. -N

Hi, This story was very interesting. It kept me hooked. It would be cool if you added on more and told about your own parents and told who matty was. ...