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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Good Life - Chapter Four: Little Fisher in the Big Sea

    Thanks for all the comments :) If you like I can send you the link to my first 3 chapters!

    Mar 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Good Life - Chapter Four: Little Fisher in the Big Sea

    Thanks for all the comments :) If you like I can send you the link to my first 3 chapters!

    Mar 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Good Life - Chapter Four: Little Fisher in the Big Sea

    Thanks for all the comments :) If you like I can send you the link to my first 3 chapters!

    Mar 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: The Good Life - Chapter Three: Not Exclusive

    Hello everyone! Thanks so much for the amazing reviews and inspirational words! You have no idea how much this has helped my writing and my self esteem! I have decided ...

    Feb 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Good Life - Chapter Two: Resistance is for Losers

    Hello everyone! Thanks so much for the amazing reviews and inspirational words! You have no idea how much this has helped my writing and my self esteem! I have decided ...

    Feb 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Good Life - Chapter One: Losing It

    Hello everyone! Thanks so much for the amazing reviews and inspirational words! You have no idea how much this has helped my writing and my self esteem! I have decided ...

    Feb 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: The Good Life - Chapter Three: Not Exclusive

    Hey! Thank-you so much :) I was actually super nervous about the sex scene, it was difficult to write without using vulgar words haha but I'm glad you liked it! ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Melanoma

    This was beautiful. I am crying. It is so real, the way that it's written makes me believe that you yourself have/had Melanoma. Your simile's are perfect, your description is ...

    Feb 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Other Re: Come Hear Me- Chapter One

    Hey! I really enjoyed this story, it's very well written and has just the right amount of description and dialogue (balance between those two are hard to find). I did ...

    Feb 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I miss you

    This was beautiful, and it made me cry! There isn't much else to say except for the fact that it is very realistic and heart-wrenching. I'm not sure if it ...

    Feb 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I miss you

    This was beautiful, and it made me cry! There isn't much else to say except for the fact that it is very realistic and heart-wrenching. I'm not sure if it ...

    Feb 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I miss you

    This was beautiful, and it made me cry! There isn't much else to say except for the fact that it is very realistic and heart-wrenching. I'm not sure if it ...

    Feb 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Good Life - Chapter Two: Resistance is for Losers

    Does this sounded too forced to you (the part in brackets): Brooke just shrugged and started down the hall, dragging Bridget towards the bathroom. Rule number one for parties: you ...

    Feb 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Good Life - Chapter One: Losing It

    Hey! Thanks for the reviews :)

    Feb 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Good Life - Chapter Two: Resistance is for Losers

    Hey! Just wondering what you think sounds better: %u201CWell she%u2019s in for a real treat, Daniel certainly knows how to give a good shag,%u201D Hayden said soundly particularly British as ...

    Feb 11, 2014


The tools of conquest do not necessarily come with bombs and explosions and fallout. There are weapons that are simply thoughts, attitudes, prejudices; to be found only in the minds of men. For the record, prejudices can kill, and suspicions can destroy. A thoughtless, frightened search for a scapegoat has a fallout all of its own.
— Rod Serling, Twilight Zone