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Thank-you for all the wonderful comments and reviews! I’m floored by how much this poem has touched people and how many people have commented on it/read it.

That's so cool! Thanks again for sharing my poem :)

I hope it doesn't either but I think after some comments that were made, it needed to be written!

I love this! It's so satirical and it just makes me smile :D Whenever I watch cartoon shows (yes I am 22 and still watch cartoons) I always laugh at ...

Thanks Nate!

That must have been very hard on you, I'm sorry you had to go through that

It's quite alright, Snoink! Thanks for backing me up :)

Wow! Thank-you so much for commenting on my poem again :) I really, really appreciate it

You just made my day! Thank-you for liking and commenting! Xx

Oh my god. I do know who Ryan Steele is! He said that? I feel like I'm going to faint...

I am completely in awe at the amount of likes and comments my poem has gotten. When I wrote this, I had no idea that so many people would be ...

I believe you're allowed to express your opinion, but it's unfair to call my work disgusting. Maybe the topic is disgusting but you shouldn't make snide marks on something someone ...

Hey! Thank-you all for the responses. I've looked over what everyone has said and made a few changes. I know a couple of you said their should be more dialogue ...

Thanks for the review guys :)

Sort of like that but I also wanted to make it clear that Daniel was the one who stopped them. I have a few ideas on how to fix it ...