ladcat13

I can't point out any more than has already been said. Great job on storyline and characters, maybe too much information in the beginning. I think the story should just ...

Very, very eloquent! I loved the style and that very subtle rhym scheme. So much emotion in so few words. Wonderful job!

Yeah it didn't really have a plot at all. But it's a true story! Absolutely true! Like, I didn't even change the details! I just paraphrased her words as she ...

Thanks so much guys! I didn't expect such great feedback for a poem that I hardly even thought about! I'll be sure to write more.

whoops i did seem to make a typo there. i type very fast and I whipped that up in a few minutes for lack of anything better to do. I'll ...

"I control water, but what good did it do for me when my life was slipping through my fingers." - "fingers?" Remember to have a question mark there. Otherwise, I ...

Just like you, Slappy, just like you. And I bet you typed that whole thing with a straight face, too. Hah! Btw, onedarkhorizon, very cute!

txs dude! I am in the process of editing and fixing that unclearness. tell me when u post Cole!

*sniff* *sniff* so sad :( Maybe write like this, with the same power and talent, but do it about something epic or something happy. Then I'll go and give it ...

Thx :)

wow. nice way to phrase a reveiw. especially on such a story. omg, by the way. i kinda had to look away, it was so vividly described. try writing like ...

I did fix the adjective thingy but I couldn't post the revised prologue because of review day. On the Word Doc. It's double spaced, so I assumed that the formatting ...

I never really checked it before I posted it, or I probly would've caught it myself. I probly shouldve checked :/ Oh well. It was only a little writing assignment ...

yeah rhyming it was a total bear for me :)

No Mirayah is a human, African-American to be exact. The slave masters are humans. There are no supposedly other slaves at the plantation she used to live at, but that's ...