kristennicole

yes, this poem is pretty amazing. It's just that I don't get the title. I wish I could help you with some names but, ? other than that, this was ...

Thanks everyone, for the great advice! I edited it, and I hope you find this version a little better? I know I did. You're the best. :D

This poem was great, but what really threw me off was the repetance of (not dear to me) if you would've put something else in there besides what you put ...

Apart from the mispelled words and incorrect grammar, this poem was actually very good. It did throw me off a little as I was trying to read it, however, I ...

Thanks for the advice. that helped alot(:

I really like this. It's good. have you ever thought about publishing?