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I was hoping this day would never come. The day I just must dissect someone's story. On the contrary, to my belief, I am pumped to be doing this, so ...

It's a great poem and I can see where you are getting with this, but it's agreed that the rhythm just isn't there and that you need to focus more ...

Wow. That's all that's going through my mind right now, just wow. The raw emotion and description that you put into this story is almost enough to bring tears to ...

-Chokes- Sorry, I tried to imagine smelling twenty different colognes at once and I nearly lost my poptarts. =) Seriously, though, I love the way you wrote this short story. ...